My Favorite People
Who is your favorite people? My favorite people is my mother. She is beautiful. She is 38 years old. She is tall and thin. She has big eyes and long hair. She likes cooking. Shecooks good meals for us every day. And she always does all the housework. She looks after my father and me. I love my mother very much.
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